Thursday, February 9, 2012

Facing it

Facing It
My black face fades,   
hiding inside the black granite.   
I said I wouldn't  
dammit: No tears.   
I'm stone. I'm flesh.   
My clouded reflection eyes me   
like a bird of prey, the profile of night   
slanted against morning. I turn   
this way—the stone lets me go.   
I turn that way—I'm inside   
the Vietnam Veterans Memorialhalf-expecting to find   
my own in letters like smoke.   
I touch the name Andrew Johnson
I see the booby trap's white flash.   
Names shimmer on a woman's blouse   
but when she walks away   
the names stay on the wall.   
Brushstrokes flash, a red bird's   
wings cutting across my stare.   
The sky. A plane in the sky.   
A white vet's image floats   
closer to me, then his pale eyes   
look through mine. I'm a window.   
He's lost his right arm   
inside the stone. In the black mirror   
a woman’s trying to erase names:   
No, she's brushing a boy's hair.


This by far has got to be one of my most favorite poems yet. The author uses a ton of images that really makes it seem like I was in the Vietnam war. However, this is not the only thing great about the poem I like the main message to show how the only thing that these men who fought hard is get a stone with a name on it. I think personally that this is not right but, that is the way the government works, if you fight and die you are just remembered by a name and then replaced with another fool. In conclusion, the poem to me is power full because its a man speaking out to tell the truth and explain in detail what military life is truly like.











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